Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Did I Get Meted Out! Comments

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Am I an asset or a liability to the society?
Or maybe, by my life they feel pity;
Have I been cursed or hated by everyone?
Or maybe, I hate myself and rather not hated by anyone;
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Haroon Rayyan
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Haroon Rayyan 23 October 2016

Thank you to everyone who supported my poems ....... was a little busy on studies,so sorry....... I got more poems which will posted soon..... once again thank you to all my well wishers :) :)

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Souren Mondal 05 November 2015

[...]my will is to suffer until it get cure; Am I the only odd one or the odds are better? ' Or maybe, I learned to get odd is bitter; '... Interesting lines and as Kelly and Valsa mentioned the poem is a very inquisitive and introspective one... I liked your references to internet slangs and mobile internet networks... A nice poem Haroon, thanks for sharing.. _______________________ P: S: Sometimes we can do fine in a 2G network.. We may not be able to buffee YouTube videos, but still browse most websites just fine ;)

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Valsa George 04 November 2015

A poem of deep self introspection! This is a test that will help you to know who you are! You answer the questions honestly and find out answers for yourself and modify your life accordingly! At this age, if you can think so deep about your entity and your personality, I am confident that you will grow into a blessing to your parents and dear ones! You can also become God's worthy creation, if you really strive for it! Enjoyed your poem!

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Kelly Kurt 04 November 2015

A inquisitive poem, Haroon. thanks for sharing

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