You have always been there
Holding my hand, standing besides me
You took a lot of care
Even when my life kept me busy....
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BEAUTIFUL AND WELL WRITTEN.IS THIS FOR A FRIEND OR LOVER?
A tender and heartfelt poem! well expressed! I admire these two verses'You sacrifice your dreams, Just to fulfill mine' Good Job ;) Merna
is there any poem of yours that won't make a girl's heart swell with adoration? i hope not because you're poems are simply amazing. from one poet to another keep sending your message out there.
A beutiful poem, we seldom tell the people we love how much they mean to us, very touching!
Wow thank you for asking me to read this its truly amazing! i love this piece of art! its a beautiful and touching poem!
marvelous art of love, love is a marvelous part in our life, embrace them close to you before you let go of them they meant a world to us i could reli.. your words in your poem in my life loved it :)
Did I ever tell you....your words convey a beautiful message. A love note of appreciation! A poem weaved with honest! ; D
thats really great too bad the vote botton only goes up to ten caz this deserves more 100000
This ‘You’ has merged in your you …and you too feel it…and subtly expressing, ‘Did I ever tell you……’ ….but this Did I tell you is telling itself …your ‘You’… ‘Feeling it’… I can bet…. thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
I love it... i do think you should look into punctuation and capitalization a little more i have not been on in a while and most of my own poetry is revised on my jump drive but not online. Its diffrent when you read it with it. which reminds me later i'll have to go fix them.THanks for having me read it.
you cant tell more than what you have told here how much you love her!
A man must be strong, but not every one knows the way it should be. Congrats! U do know. U can feel that meaning of ur woman`s care and hopefully appreciate it. Keep writing, I need more poems of urs!
it is so happy to read a poem from happy person telling a story of happy day as a happy couple...i wish u will tied with love together forever...this love is a magic and u use the magic to create such a lovely poem...she inspired u very much..thanks to her
Rightly said by John Ruskin- 'When LOVE & SKILL work together, expect a MASTERPIECE'. Wonderful expression of true feelings...Rohit Keep pouring from ur heart! !
hey well i dont knw so much about poems..bt dis poem really dedicated 2 mah frnds farha and anshul......dis is really a heart touchng poem......thnxxxxxxxx