Did I Deserve It? * Comments

Very emotional portrayal of the abuse so many endure...yet pain shared diminishes....

This is a very bitter piece, but well penned. Parents can be tough to take at times. They can so easily hurt their children in so many ways, but experience has taught me that the worst of wounds and scars can mend when dealing with the heart. Though the journey is never an easy one. Well done.

'My heart cut into yet another piece. You can not see the unseen scars on my skin, ' very touching and very sad.....10 Hataw

actually dear i wanna reply the poem in some otherway but cant as after read the poem i got such imotional that i cant do anyhting in this moment.... really great

A heart breaking read, but well penned.

So much pain, and such sadness. Fortunately you expressed yourself in this poem.

wow, very emotional, not many things make me almost tear up but I could feel the urge reading this. Thanks for sharing.

Such suffering is without reason or gain few things if any warrant such as you described...Thank you....

Great reflection! Ammmmmmazing flow! ....10+

No you didn't... Most of the time in life we have two options... As Shakespeare said in Hamlet... 'Whether ‘tis nobler in the mind to suffer The slings and arrows of outrageous Fortune, Or to take arms against a sea of troubles, And by opposing end them' A great and courageous write... do think on what I just said above quoting Shakespeare... Regards, Kamran

Ahh you had me there til the 'size 8 shoe' Crystal! ! Awesome write! *10*! ! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

first i thought a man so sad to know t'was your mom-- great write Crystal regards anjali

Very well done - as I read I thought a man, only to find the mother. Excellently how the I was set on one thing only to realize another. I liked it very much.

This was so real and sad. It was written well. I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did. You are an amazing writer.

a poignant verses..well expressed and written well..great piece...A 10 Ency Bearis

Ouch so bitterly good...