Sunday, November 9, 2008

Diary Of A Young Bird (1) Comments

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a feeling to trust,
fly to whatever skies lie forward.
young, helpless, blunt,
that's how my wings flap..
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Aijaz Asif 23 November 2008

yes some times our heart also feels like tiny scared and hurt bird, who wants to fly...fly-(light hearted, loved with happy feelings) , but winds of loneliness and sorrows do not let it fly...i might got the wrog idea of this poem, anyway its a very beautiful piece and i luvd it, thanks for sharing 10++ rgds asif

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 November 2008

A beautiful poem indeed. Keep it up dear poet!

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