Diaries Of A Mermaid Comments

Good imagination, wonderful Rgds Nooruddeen

This is good, and very imaginative. The mermaid questions why man should be killing her friends (the sea animals) and other things. After all the lines 'We love the beauty/ & that's why the lord created us here/ &serving man is our duty/ we never worry about the next hour, day or year...' show how ironic that man being the most important of all God's creation turn out to be the creatures who worry too much.

very wondeful and fantastic

love it 10+++++++++++++

I have too many questions in my soul I wonder if people r living by a rule? R they happy & enjoying this world? Or they r sad & feeling bored? .............. beautiful reflections..thanks for sharing.....keep up the good work..........

yeah! me too wonder ' if people r living by a rule? ' thnks for yr message...

i loved it, you really have talent -Masha2allah- you have to keep on writting so i could keep enjoying!

I love the rhythmic flow.. This poem is sweet and illustrative.. Good Job sweetheart. The Sage Anthony Edmond John

this is really really really FANTASTIC zeinab....i didnt imagine i will enjoy it that much :) your poem is really great....keep it up girl ;)

wonderful and ralaxing diary entry of a little mermaid... :)

very good... you sure you 15?

We love the beauty & that's why the lord created us here &serving man is our duty we never worry about the next hour, day or year Mam you have got visually of a lost part of life.....Excellent......

marvelous...lovely to read...with compelling imagery

It is a great piece. Really beautiful

Extremely well thoughts, and a lovely poem as well as the creative and unique title

This poem is wonderful and very touching to read. It entered my heart with a great impact. I salute you, Zeinab!

wonderful poem, lovely to read..............

very divine writing..I can hear the voices of mermaid...10++

so beautiful poem Zainab with beautiful images..enjoyed it dear

If mermaid could live on land, I 'd be the first one to propose to them.Beautiful piece Zeinab.