Thursday, October 16, 2014

Diamonds In The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.8

The bright sun rises above the earth like a sparkling jewel
Shines its light with such radiance and warms the air

Then sets in the west to make a way for the luminous moon
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Patricia Grantham
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* Sunprincess * 21 November 2014

............oh this is so beautiful and the imagery is breath-taking.....loved reading this one :)

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 23 October 2014

Draping the sky like portrait brilliant and radiant clouds suddenly turn blue to gray, very nice description about diamonds in the sky. Master piece of work.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 October 2014

Beautiful observations of nature's wonders that sustain life on earth. Nice words like diamonds set in lines. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

sky, a portrait, painted by the hands of God, ah! such a nice thought comes only for nature and God thank you Patricia

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Connie Marcum Wong 20 October 2014

Patricia, This lovely peaceful poem left me with a feeling of serenity with calming visions of the moon's splendor. Aloha

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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