Monday, October 9, 2006

Diamonds In The Drunken Glare Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come walk with me
On this midnight boulevard,
I’m by myself and so afraid;
Passing headlights are few
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Ernestine Northover 10 October 2006

This I like Uriah. A very well constructed poem with a pictorial setting. A lovely read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 09 October 2006

The contrast of the broken glass looking like diamonds...perfect! And the occasional lights that go by to light the darkness..Very well done, UH, I like this.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 October 2006

No time than THIS time, for a NEW time....Great piece....good language & smooth even-flow throughout...A nice Penning, Uriah'''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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