Colleen Wright

Colleen Wright

Central west of New South Wales, Australia.
Thursday, August 31, 2006

Diamonds From Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too many long scorching summers of unending heat
have passed and burned away hopes - no rain – defeat.
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Brian Dorn 05 September 2006

'Dancing diamonds' and 'dripping silver from the trees, ' awesome imagery, Colleen! ! Great write! ! Brian

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Marilyn Shepperson 31 August 2006

An excellent poem, beautifully written. We had a very hot summer here in the UK and it caused all sorts of problems. We're just not used to it! T hank God, it is raining now and my apple trees are going to give a good harvest. Marilyn

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Patricia Gale 31 August 2006

Splendid! Such lovely imagery. A flow like a soft gently rain

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Krishna Dasani 31 August 2006

hey colleen, i guess you have mastered the art of playing with words! ! a beautiful thought penned down in a splendid manner.. its magical.. really amazed.. smiles, krishna

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Steve Hagget 31 August 2006

I love the theme Colleen and I think you've pulled it off really well with your use of language, Steve

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Kee Thampi 31 August 2006

This poem deal with a good dream theme. Poetry portray really natural way to express our mind. Pen. words and emotions. Pains of a lovee mind. it is not a outburst of words..... use utmost little, make a feel of wide..bloosm your writes is really from real world, and rarely from dreamy lovable World ... ''sparkling, liquid diamonds fall and rush from the sky, as if to elope. Dancing diamonds appear now as if dripping silver from the trees.... Poetry never makes a plenty. My dear Colleen use little .. con....in great write of best. with love of your hard work

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Colleen Wright

Colleen Wright

Central west of New South Wales, Australia.
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