Too many long scorching summers of unending heat
have passed and burned away hopes - no rain – defeat.
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An excellent poem, beautifully written. We had a very hot summer here in the UK and it caused all sorts of problems. We're just not used to it! T hank God, it is raining now and my apple trees are going to give a good harvest. Marilyn
Splendid! Such lovely imagery. A flow like a soft gently rain
hey colleen, i guess you have mastered the art of playing with words! ! a beautiful thought penned down in a splendid manner.. its magical.. really amazed.. smiles, krishna
I love the theme Colleen and I think you've pulled it off really well with your use of language, Steve
This poem deal with a good dream theme. Poetry portray really natural way to express our mind. Pen. words and emotions. Pains of a lovee mind. it is not a outburst of words..... use utmost little, make a feel of wide..bloosm your writes is really from real world, and rarely from dreamy lovable World ... ''sparkling, liquid diamonds fall and rush from the sky, as if to elope. Dancing diamonds appear now as if dripping silver from the trees.... Poetry never makes a plenty. My dear Colleen use little .. con....in great write of best. with love of your hard work
'Dancing diamonds' and 'dripping silver from the trees, ' awesome imagery, Colleen! ! Great write! ! Brian