Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, February 12, 2010

Diamonds Are Forever Comments

Rating: 4.3

Diamonds are for ever and to be retained as treasure
So are the friends whose love can’t be measured
Both occupy a unique position and play a vital role
We keep them at heart and feel very near to our soul
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

Diamonds are for ever and to be retained as treasure So are the friends whose love can’t be measured.. it is real treasure...10

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2010

This really leave me so speechless... the beautiful crafted word is amazing... i think u are the great poet..i can feel it and oh..it really leave me to think more...amazing

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Ellery Lim 27 February 2010

nice poem. nice rhyming. very optimistic. style wise, its nice and well crafted, i agree with the rest, you used the almost perfect metaphor. but perhaps, my style is totally different from yours, as i would use an irony at the end, perhaps something like death will seperate us but in thy heart i would linger. goodbye my lover, my diamond like friend

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 February 2010

'I have only love and affection to offer but not the fight To be in near vicinity and not loosing hope or sight ' Indeed you've all [Love Affection Hopefulness] are the propelling force Very sholarly crafted and eucatitive as usual I imbibe Thanks for forwarding my feelings 10+ Ms Nivedita UK

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Joey Valenzuela 17 February 2010

wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing.... i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece.... and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship... i should have told my friends that they are diamonds.... thanks for this....

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John Knight 17 February 2010

Hi Hasmukh - Theis is a megapoem with very good rhytm and rhyme. I has good flow. V 1 Diamonds are a condensed form of carbon and are valuable because of their rarity - hardness - durability and lustre. It is magic jewel that has dazzled Kings - Knights - Knaves throughout human history. V 2 Diamonds represent wealth and stability and they are the greatest symbol of love between a man and a woman. V 3 Ladies are like diamonds - priceless and multifaceted. V 4 They glow with an inner light. V 5 Jewellry crafted with daimonds is always beautiful and alwys fashionable. V 6 Each diamomnd - like each lady - have an intrinsic beauty nothing can mar. V 7 Diamond is the hardest substance known to man. The moral is: Never mess witha woman! V 8 Never underestimate a woman - like a diamomnd her value increases day by day. An older woman brings experience to all circumastances! V 9 The depth of fire - in a diamond - is unfathamable. Likewise the depth of love and devotion is infinite compared with man's shallowness. V 10 Men forget and eliminate but (V 11) Ladies remember everything - know everything - can do everything - like diamonds their love and devotion is forever. God created Adam first - he looked at the product - rechecked and revised His blueprint and created woman - PERFECTION. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

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Amy J-Jordan 13 February 2010

I hope you survive to continue to write. Your poem is beautiful.

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Omar Ibrahim 13 February 2010

(What a lovely feeling mixed with sorrow, love and hate) ...contradiction between love and hate makes my mind think a lot and try to mix them in one feeling.that's interesting....the poem is full of wonderful words which made me think about every verse alone.i read it two times to figure it out.great poem. thanks for sharing

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Dulakshi Wakista 13 February 2010

You've created a wonderful poem.I like the stanza 'Thousand have stood by me in my creative work to go on'.i really loved i.It has so valuable meaning.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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