Monday, March 28, 2011

Diamond In The Rust Comments

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Despair in cycle, right on time,
A feeling oft expressed in prose and rhyme,
deadly purpose set arrow straight,
on a bow of dire fear and hate.
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Kevin Maroney
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Go Higher 26 April 2011

Nice use of vocabulary, though I must admit I was bit thrown by the attempted rhyming of 'escape' and what should have been 'gapes', but at least you hit on a catchy title :) (Please forgive the lack of coherency. I really did mean to write a helpful comment, but it's nearing 1: 00 in the morning where i am...*yawn*)

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