we found you on the open dock
a child with eyes of age
we took you in for the good of our sins
and a greater fear of god's rage
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There is a book called 'Mr. God, this is Anna'. This poem could be about Anna. Well worth a read!
I was called a rough diamond when I was young.Makes me think of quite enjoyable times. Ha! I love this one.
a classic pirate chant! beautifully started and beautiful ended. great job!
A poem like diamond in the rough..... Beautiful, Lee......10/10.
Diamonds are forever...............in any circumstances butta, only genuine ones.Good job Lee.nice works.
Fabulous opus...great theme and crafted with a very nice message..........10/10
Absolutly brilliant write Lee....talent shines through this diamond in the rough...well written and very well done you..thank you...Fi10++++
Open up very well for the reader.. This has great thoughts thank you for sharing great write Krista
and this is a good piece, too.This goes to my favorite.You are a talent.
This is a very captivating poem from beginning to end. A gem indeed, but not so rough. A 10 from me. Richard
I believe that this is one of the best writes that I have ever read. I will say no more. I'll just take it as a favorite and give you a ten. And tell you once more. This is A DIAMOND IN THE ROUGH. And they tell me there are no perfect poems. GW62
Very fascinating. You have woven a great suspense and 'flummoxed' the reader. Is it a case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hide?