Thursday, February 5, 2009

Diamond In The Rough Comments

Rating: 5.0

we found you on the open dock
a child with eyes of age
we took you in for the good of our sins
and a greater fear of god's rage
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Lee Crowell
COMMENTS
M A 16 May 2009

Very fascinating. You have woven a great suspense and 'flummoxed' the reader. Is it a case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hide?

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Sue S. 06 April 2009

There is a book called 'Mr. God, this is Anna'. This poem could be about Anna. Well worth a read!

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Sally Plumb 09 March 2009

I was called a rough diamond when I was young.Makes me think of quite enjoyable times. Ha! I love this one.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 February 2009

exceptional poem, Lee...classic...i must say...10+

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Angelica Ortiz 08 February 2009

a classic pirate chant! beautifully started and beautiful ended. great job!

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Kim Wagener 08 February 2009

I always enjoy your work, Lee. Kim Wilkins

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 February 2009

A poem like diamond in the rough..... Beautiful, Lee......10/10.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 08 February 2009

Well done. Nice poem.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 February 2009

Diamonds are forever...............in any circumstances butta, only genuine ones.Good job Lee.nice works.

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Linda Winchell 07 February 2009

Very well done! Ten, LInda

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Ency Bearis 07 February 2009

Beautiful poem..great write..what more I can say..10

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 February 2009

outstanding poem.....bravo! !

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

Fabulous opus...great theme and crafted with a very nice message..........10/10

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Fiona Davidson 07 February 2009

Absolutly brilliant write Lee....talent shines through this diamond in the rough...well written and very well done you..thank you...Fi10++++

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Open up very well for the reader.. This has great thoughts thank you for sharing great write Krista

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Meggie Gultiano 07 February 2009

and this is a good piece, too.This goes to my favorite.You are a talent.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 February 2009

A classic. Memorable poem.10++++++

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C.R. Clark 06 February 2009

This is a very captivating poem from beginning to end. A gem indeed, but not so rough. A 10 from me. Richard

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 February 2009

I believe that this is one of the best writes that I have ever read. I will say no more. I'll just take it as a favorite and give you a ten. And tell you once more. This is A DIAMOND IN THE ROUGH. And they tell me there are no perfect poems. GW62

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