Diamond Dance. Comments

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Fay...that was just great-you explained how I feel when I dance [15 yrs of comp ballroom dancing] it was just magic nuff said ++++10 regards uavnicescotch

I know I have commented once but I love this poem fay going to add it to my Favorites.

A dazzling display of a diamond dancing with amazing images and scintillating words to create a spectacle of sheer brilliance! 10 Karin Anderson

wow..this is such dazzling and amazing one indeed..I enjoyed it very much....too bad it ended short...thank you so much for this one... best wishes with love shan

dear fay its hard to recognize bounderies of imagination and reality here in this poem, blended greatly +++10

Wish I was there now Fay 10+++++

Fantastic imagery. you took me to the seaside fay.

Another fan here Fay. Very beautiful. I reckon Gerard Manley Hopkins would have given this one a 10.

Fabulous imagery Fay...makes me feel I was there with you watching this amazing dance....Fi 10++++

.This sounds like a Ballet.Swan Lake...with all its refinery..can see the images well written and joy to read...10++ Sue

a fantastic poem..nice imagery write...great piece...10

your description had the heart dancing a duet with nature! ! Simply superb! you could perhaps work into smaller lines.....a small suggestion! For it was a read rhyme lacking But imaginations! wow! simply superb! I admire you for your thoughts!

An exquisite piece Fay....your choice of words and imagery are amazing. The last two lines I agree with everyone are just brilliant. this is one of my favourites 10+++

'By cosmic joy. Then breezes died, the sun Went into hiding, and the dance was done.' These conclusive lines are amazing,10++

Hi, Fay, Very beautiful a poem, and this of lines, 'willed By cosmic joy. Then breezes died, ' it is simply remarkable! Best wishes, Tsira

Dusk is the best part of the day you capture it's beauty so well