Diamond (C) 8-28-09 Comments

i like this poem for two reasons one it got something to do with my name and two its jus a beautiful poem altogether

ur a good writer uve werote lots man keep up the good work eh! !

HEAVEN; I am a diamond in the sand.

Chances of gettin a diamond in the sand are small Its better to find your riches in heaven Good write

Smiling here... yeah... the treasure at the end of the rainbow... always an illusion as it's the journey that makes a man not the thing he finds... Like your sense of humour at the end. Good Poem... entertaining and kept me reading easily.