Monday, July 23, 2012

Dial Tone Comments

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So he didn't call back
Was he busy?

To busy to pick up?

It's like that with God sometimes
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Josephine Lauderdale
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Saadat Tahir 07 May 2013

yes great metaphor... do i perceive the chagrin and pine correctly liked the no nonsense straight speak nicely put blessings

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Leslie Philibert 23 July 2012

A fine poem that lives through ideas, a clever extended metaphor.

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Josephine Lauderdale

Josephine Lauderdale

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