Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Diagnosis Depression Comments

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It's dark and dingy
Disturbingly cold
It sucks up your vitality
It ruthless it's bold
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Thoughtful write. Beautiful lines...Very true said in few lines.... Depression is a real thing Malady that kills you from within While your stories go untold It's pain has eaten up your core Very true said, it is really a sad state of mind. To over come depression, it's really very difficult. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Donnie Wolff 10 September 2014

I dont know or have the words.. Haha i wish i could touch each one of these people that are us. And i try, with my words. I want them, us, etc to see the future, its unknown, belongs to us. We create our own, so after writing the poem that maybe inspired yours. Its a deep deep day for me. A lot of words for not having any, i know...

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