Friday, July 1, 2011

Dia De Julio Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the first day of July I gave my heart away,
I trusted you completely, in every word you say.
Nothing prepared me for the rush from deep inside.
Nothing could erase these feelings that I tried to hide.
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Cilene Farrell
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Cilene Farrell 01 July 2011

Thank you :) . I will definitely check out your work.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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