Dhua Dhua Sa Rhne Do... Comments

ye dhua dhua sa rehne do. zindagi ko suni aur es dard ko dil me rehne do....excellent.

dhundli ye parchai kyun lagti apni kyun? Fantastic discovery though not Eureka!

You might like to read my translation of your poem captioned Let My Misty Mind Misty Remain

chalne ko saath to puri kayenaath hai. par aaj hume yun tanha hi rehne do.... par aaj hume khud se khafa hi rhne do.... Brilliantly penned.

Beautiful Gazal. words that come from heart touch the other hearts without any effort. Thanks for sharing. Loved the picture.

no words mam...simply awesome and of course 10

Wah wah...Kya baat hai. Maza aagaya padh kar....Loved it, Sona.10++++