Thursday, April 23, 2009

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The gun fires,
I’m running fast,
The echo of the shot
Rings in my ears
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Tyler Smith
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Rachael Lee 01 May 2009

Good description. It reminds me of 7th grade track with good memories. Really like your writing.

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SAM Mitsuki 27 April 2009

Oh wow i thought the dude was getting shot at lol. But once i finished it i got it^~ Great work! I love your writing.

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Britney Hogue 23 April 2009

Good poem. I enjoyed it Britney

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