Monday, August 22, 2022

Dewdrops Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, shrill lark, just breathe. You rage too well.
Seek no comfort in wretchedness.

Renounce the gossamer moon, curse starlight
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anais vionet
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Bri Edwards 23 August 2022

OOPS! ! Here is a retraction re my earlier comment: 'undistinguishable' in my first comment was supposed to be 'indistinguishable'!

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anais vionet 23 August 2022

sure, but those didn't have the right feel - too modern

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Bri Edwards 23 August 2022

Use 'undistinguishable'. Use 'unabashedly'. I like much prefer what I call your story-poems. ;)

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anais vionet 23 August 2022

Ilike the story poems better too. Thanks

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Kim Barney 22 August 2022

Good stuff. Five stars.

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