Thursday, February 12, 2015

Dew On My Face Comments

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Cloud rains within me,
When clouds rain,
I feel pain,
Through the beautifying cave,
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Susan Williams 21 November 2020

Tears drain, Making me lighter than ever, - - - - - - - women know this truth

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2015

Dew of face does clean dirt around and helps in shining with cheerfulness. Rain helps in feeling pain of separation from cloud but does good for Earth to bring green scene. Wonderful poem.

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