Saturday, October 3, 2015

Dew On Emerald Grass - Haiku Comments

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Sunrise, emerald grass
Toes curl, sink velvety wet cushion
Scatter million dew diamonds
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Seema Jayaraman
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Chuy Amante 03 October 2015

Low-Ku feet in wet grass now feeling ecstatic, like WOW! until I smell pee

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Seema Jayaraman 04 October 2015

Mr. Nobody, thanks for stopping by.. thankfully my patch of green is secured at least I don't have to worry about smelling pee... in fact it drizzled last night and I could get a faint whiff of crushed fresh green grass.. thanks

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