The difference between you and her
(whom I to you did once prefer)
Is clear enough to settle:
She like a diamond shone, but you
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Great piece of work. Very apt comparison. The difference is clear. While the drop of dew holds the world in its smallness the diamond splits the world into fragments. Loved it.
She like a diamond shone, but you Shine like an early drop of dew Poised on a red rose petal. Diamond and dew drop. fine images. tony
She like a diamond shone, but you Shine like an early drop of dew Poised on a red rose petal....... amusing expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.
To shine in bits and pieces when when one is shattered to its core......that is where lies beauty of life......marvelous poem worthy of member poem place.
Beautiful poem! True feelings expressed in such a honest and sincere way.
That none can piece together//// none can pieces that together though there is difference seemingly but in love no difference between you and her .....beautiful poem really
Wonderful simile! Wonderful observations! A nice poem of the day!
'Is clear enough to settle'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dew drop and diamond, this poem deserves adding to my favourite poems because its just unique and original too
Magnanimity of natural beauty bestowed on a dew drop wonderfully unveiled in the backdrop of the beauty bestowed on a diamond. Well deserving poem of the day. Congrats.