A very profound piece. We can learn a lot about life through observing nature. Deft use of vocabulary.
The poem shows Yasmeen Khan's amazing vocabulary, she uses words like quivers, frisky and trickles and describes what is described by others in so many lines. What a great poetess is she!
Wonderfully beautiful haiku Yasmeen Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Wonderfully beautiful Haiku Yasmeen. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
An excellent haiku! How short lived is a dew drop, yet What a beauty it beholds as long as it lives!
Kind thanks for your nice words