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Come on Herbert you can get eject a better one out of the can than this. Sid John (Disappointed)

A sensuous picture of nature at work in every sense. I'll take it, Herbsy. G.

disobedient angel, GREAT POEM, WELCOME BACK.................

HN, Good to read you. Hope your world is well. Bill Grace

And ' within the shade of ancient junipers', she slept at ease, yet only till, the gasping, ... of his next breath.. Beautiful poem. :)

A GREAT PIECE OF POETRY HERBERT SO WELL SAID WITH SO FEW WORDS WARM REGARDS AJS