Wednesday, November 26, 2014

Devotion Comments

Rating: 3.5

You stepped into my world and opened up a door,
A door that was opened by no one else before.
You stepped into my life and made each day a dream,
Dreams are always perfect and that's what my days seem.
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Shabeeh Haider
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 December 2014

I have much to offer you but nothing more to give, Than this hearts devotion, every minute that I live... nice lines...10 We were never known Yet owned Life that was precious For all of us I shall hold Your hand in world To show That we shall humanly grow

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Valentin Savin 28 November 2014

A very nice poem. I appreciate your last two lines: I have much to offer you but nothing more to give, Than this hearts devotion, every minute that I live.

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Paul Reed 27 November 2014

A beautiful and pure poem, short and sweet, nothing more needs to be said. Thanks for sharing with us.

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