Friday, September 11, 2009

Devotion Comments

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Devotion is the hope,
To turn the dreams into reality,
Devotion is the desire,
To give life into heartfelt entities.
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Joseph Poewhit 11 September 2009

Devotion gives that strength in times of woe

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 September 2009

good assonance. Nice way of your style. Yes, we should not just stick to rhymes but to use also other types of poetry!

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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