Sunday, June 4, 2023

Devolution Of Charles Darwin's Evolution Theory- Satirical Comments

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Charles Darwin, whether thought direct or indirect means,
that humans, apes, and monkeys descend from common genes,
a concept that's both eerie and satirical in its themes,
as we return to our primal roots, donning monkey suits,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 05 June 2023

It has already paved the jungle path.What we call progression is really regression from psychological point of view.Now we are inferior to all other animals.very insightful poem written satirically.Enjoyed it from start to finish.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much Dr. Dash. you got the real essence of my poem. We are on the reverse gear instead of going forward we are moving backward, all our inventions, innovations are used to scare humanity in general.

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Apes, monkeys and humans evolved from a common ancestor. Evolution does not stop at humans, nor does it anywhere. So, a different species more intelligent and dominant than humans can evolve from any of the existing species….

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much for your comment, Unni Ji, are we not moving backward if what Darwin said is true? We have more animal instincts than animal itself. Might and powerful rules.

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David Wood 05 June 2023

The future is a scary thought...

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u David.

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Pallavi Tripathi 05 June 2023

Wonderfully put and kinda genius take on evolution, Yuval Noah Harari might not agree though

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u Pallavi for interesting comment, I know many will disagree but the way we are behaving is leading us no where.

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Anjandev Roy 05 June 2023

Brilliant and relevant piece.....thank u.... friend.....

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u ADR for liking it.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 June 2023

wonderful my fellow poet just wonderful

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much LeeAnn for this appreciation.

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D.N. Rebb 05 June 2023

A direction well worth exploring. It would make a better planet.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much Mr. Rebb. To make this planet a better place the baton is passed on to the poets now, only we have creative freedom to express what is happening otherwise everyone else is on mute mode.

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The way things are moving Darwin might have to reform his theory....... : ) Thank you Asim ji for sharing these thoughts......10

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much Geeta ji, I was evaluating the Darwin theory with a view-point of 'Survival of the fittest' and thought of this idea, what if we all are evolved from common ancestor are we not behaving like monkey? Groupism, Division, Strong Leader etc etc.

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I loved this poem Asim ji. Some humour in poems makes it delightful reading.Like Rose remarks let us not be surprised if monkeys wear suits.

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Poetic Sky 05 June 2023

In behaviour we are moving towards it....hope some day we will realise that what is the value of being human.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Thank u so much Poetics Sky yes you said it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2023

Brilliant thoughts! So true and in due time monkeys will be wearing suits.Like how you crafted this poem. Full of wit and humor.Top Marks.

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M. Asim Nehal 05 June 2023

Thank u so much for wonderful comment.

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Suzon Albert 04 June 2023

Very true, the way we are behaving today will lead us to the jungle. We will return to Stone Age soon. I started doing wild imaginations now. Where are the rating Stars? ? ? ? ?

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M. Asim Nehal 05 June 2023

Thank u so much for wonderful comment. Stars Gone....

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Rajan T Renganathan 04 June 2023

Brilliant satire, we are moving backwards, with all advancements we are killing self, people around, bullying counties and what not. You artfully highlighted the matter with a touch of humor.

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M. Asim Nehal 04 June 2023

Reverse mechanism always fascinates, we have no choice but to move forward though we can look back and rejoice certain moments, Thanks for your comments.

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