Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Devoid Of Subtleties Comments

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I wrote my sentiments into poems,
To express and expound innate thoughts.
It is my fault that I cannot strike the passion,
Of poetic phrases devoid of the subtleties.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Jemarie Ragudo 29 October 2007

Cmon! Don't be like that. A lot of people like your style of writing. We can't please everyone, right? Continue to write for I'm one of those who will go on reading your work.

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Raveendran . 19 October 2007

'the surge of feelings so moved by an urge' beautiful poetic utterance

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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