my soul commerce me,
chamber of death,
is all I see,
wish it would disapear,
...
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Hmm, a bit complicated, but it means something alright. When life gets you down, it can be pretty crappy. As I said before you have talent, just like the many around who also writes poetry. You have a gothic feel to your writing, very dark. I like your style. I'll write about anything.
I agree with Sam. You have great talent indeed.