Friday, February 24, 2006

Devious Silence. Comments

Rating: ★3.6

devious silence,
i wish to know you.
hold me firmly in your arms
and make the pain retreat.
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John Kipling Lewis
silence
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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Perfect just the way it is, great job!

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2. Cliched. Lines 2-4, in particular, have been repeated almost verbatim in countless poems, pop lyrics, etc. A subject as thoroughly written about as love needs to be treated with 100% originality and striking detail. This isn't it.

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C Smith 05 November 2007

not a single word less nor more is needed

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Donna Robertson 03 August 2007

I like it - it says something to me.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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John Kipling Lewis
Manhattan, KS
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