Devils Playgroung Comments

For the devil's playground has surely engulfed your moral spirit, a doomed soul on the path of no return. finally the poems ends with a wonderful positive note of hope and goodness. let your poems be full of such reverberating and resonating center of hope........... tony

I must echo the previous commenters, Annette, for this is truly a powerful piece and a striking glimmer of the great potential inside you that is now coming forth. Vividly rendered portrait of the struggle of good and evil, and our small lives caught on the battlefield. Bravo!

My dear friend, you have opened the gates of hades and walked out...the human worth! ! ! ! We are watching you become the great poet I know you you to be! ! ! This is one of the best poems I have read in a very long time! Be proud! ! !