Tuesday, June 6, 2017

Devils' Midnight Saga Comments

Rating: 5.0

Defense base's glory, ablaze
gleaning in starry display
erected a giant smoky column
within a fire work flaunt
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

While fireflies! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 04 August 2017

The memory of a great catastrophe re played in all its horror and mayhem! Great write!

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Thank you Valsa for the hearty comment.

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Devil's midnight Saga is a sad poem that speaks of not just of accidents or disaster alone but of a terrifying episode. When you see big structures crumbling down in fire, it is a very heart rending sight. The poem also focuses on the insensitivity of human nature, the people who are bent on making it a national news than compassion for the people or the terrible situation. Very well done, Jayatissa. A full vote for this poem.

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Thank you Geeta for your revival comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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