Monday, October 6, 2008

Devils Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark wings burn as they enfold
A touch of fire and yet so cold
A song of death and destruction
An ardent sting of sweet seduction
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T.James Becker
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Reshma Ramesh 07 December 2008

superb haunting write.......................10! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Very interesting. 10 added.

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Brianne Lindline 18 October 2008

Wow. A fantastic poem. This is defidantly my favorite poem written by you. Awesome job.

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Ershad Mazumder 17 October 2008

Superb bear James. No marking.

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Dee Daffodil 16 October 2008

Excellent flow to this one. I like the theme here...temptation to strong to resist. Hugs, dee

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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