Saturday, October 25, 2014

Devil Yeti In Disguise Comments

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He blushes a shade of tomato red
The Devil is never born but bred
Into this world we have all read
that the Devil is a dude dressed in fiery red!
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Philo Yan 25 October 2014

Hello Michael Thank you for taking the time to reply and for your suggestion. Indeed, I started writing prose by accident when a friend challenge me to write a poem and this particular poem was written in jest with some of my friends. I am not sure what you mean when you say, quote, a regiment of double Frangelico with a warm Guinness back I wish you every success in your work.

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Michael Walkerjohn 25 October 2014

Aloha Philo... Caught your bio and focused on your request for rapport... I have found that the most simple of polite conversations creates a mood that allows a more concise free write... and prose is the quest for a better free write... now honing that enticing subject into a better bit of poetry... that takes some research, and a few deliberate personal choices... You have a fine body of work posted here at ph.c You have the time and resources to review each of your posts... after some years you have developed a satisfying interest in how your words are accepted in these circles... Now is the time to choose a poetic genre... and fine tune a few of your past posts into the form required to be considered as a proper poem... Might I suggest a regiment of double Frangelico with a warm Guinness back... one round each as you decide on your new pathway into the more complicated fields of the poetic universe... Oh... I do business with both of these fellows you mention in this post... and yes, within the limited expanse of my own poetic torment... I have found some personal satisfaction with the ways I have progressed as a composer of words that bend and twist and weave and jest... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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