Devil's Temptation Comments

I really like this one as well! Do you ever write free verse? If not, you should give it a shot.

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVED THIS POEM. this poem is very good, i give it a 10/10. ttfn

This is a very good poem when you represent the devil as a women very outstanding.

nice poem like the flow and settin of it all....sweet that a chick is the devils temptation..nice job

This is my personal gave, Thomas. I love the way the devil is portrayed as a woman ad the suffering she brings to those that engage her. At least, that's what I got from it. Good piece. Best, Sarah

Wow! O_O : -0 Ok that's all I can say!