Thursday, March 23, 2017

Devil's Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

She could feel the gentle breeze on her back,
The shady shadows in front,
She paused -the cold blade poised,
A momentof hesitation...
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Jaishree Nair
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Dimitrios Galanis 29 January 2018

Though I am not sure whether I understand every detail of it, I have the feeling that it is a great writing, a lament for a girl who fell prey of a sexual abuse or rape may be...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

The lamp is dancing and shadows have come in front. Sealing the secret in heart mesmerizes mind. An amazing poem this is wonderfully composed is thought provoking as well as thoughtful....10

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