Thursday, March 12, 2020

Devil S Hold Comments

Rating: 5.0

The devil had came and took a hold of me, but GOD
Came and set me free.
There was temptations all around and that's where I'd be found.
Hurting myself and so many others, not caring for sisters or brothers
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2020

The devil had came and took a hold of me, but GOD Came and set me free..... fantastic beginning with lofty theme. The concluding line is too much impressive. This is really a marvelous poem on the base of spirituality and philosophy. Full vote.

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