Friday, February 9, 2007

Devil In My Bed Comments

Rating: 5.0

there is a devil in my bed
a creature so intense
with a hatred so immense
that the thought of him making me spread
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Dyna Misery
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

your rhythmic patterns are outstanding.. marvelous job great poem

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The Dead Poet 10 February 2007

I enjoyed reading this poem, we have similar types of rhymes. Cool

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