On paper things are oft bright like sun,
But when talks can walk not, can they run?
Like a race of relay,
Damn, details do delay.
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Dear sir, you have cutely delineated this poem which is very interesting to read. Beautiful poem with humor is amazingly shared. Thanks.
Thanks are fine, but it feels good when poets like you read my poem and appreciate.
A great political satire in a fascinating limerick. A clever write.
But when talks can walk not, can they run? Absolutely amazing sir! Enjoyed the humor........................10
Humour the way to bring the point home. Thank you Dr Swain, I appreciate.
Great observational humour! Yes, those details do manage to become walls of defiance. Perhaps that is why we seek out the simple solutions that inevitably lead astray....
Well said, and thanks for the feedback.