Friday, July 5, 2019

Devil In Details Comments

Rating: 5.0

On paper things are oft bright like sun,
But when talks can walk not, can they run?
Like a race of relay,
Damn, details do delay.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mj Lemon 05 July 2019

Great observational humour! Yes, those details do manage to become walls of defiance. Perhaps that is why we seek out the simple solutions that inevitably lead astray....

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Well said, and thanks for the feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

Dear sir, you have cutely delineated this poem which is very interesting to read. Beautiful poem with humor is amazingly shared. Thanks.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Thanks are fine, but it feels good when poets like you read my poem and appreciate.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2019

A great political satire in a fascinating limerick. A clever write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Thanks indeed, Rose Marie, for the feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2019

But when talks can walk not, can they run? Absolutely amazing sir! Enjoyed the humor........................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Humour the way to bring the point home. Thank you Dr Swain, I appreciate.

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