Devil And The Damned Comments

10 out of 10 my friend! ! ! Great poem defining a great struggle!

I love the last two stanza's, they really makes this poem. The poem is very good by ti's selve, but the lst two lines make it more than epic

A soulful read. Good luck to you, my dear stranger-friend.

Amazing..though i had to read twice to understand it. So true, we have to fight with our own evil thoughts to bring good in ourselves and others for the benefit of mankind. Great write. Please do read my poems 'Never love in life' & 'I love you' and write your comments.

Poe wrote somewhere about the denizens that 'laugh but do not smile.' This reminds me of Poe, and that is no put-down. Good stuff; great for halloween.

love the part about past lives... good poem, again crossing the thin barrier between life and death!

Very interesting metaphors. I like the vague word play here, nice touch. Beautiful work, as always.

Yeah the angels told you true, dont let the devils hurt you... But if they dare do that to you i will find my strength to punch them to protect you...but you should protect yourself Mr.Superman hahahahaha...Another great poem with strong elements, like the spirit, adore the words, it's amazing write Dave! _Unwritten Soul

Wow this is very insightful i love it keep writing! (: