Monday, March 19, 2012

Devil And The Beast Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sitting and waiting
first for the sun
Then for the moon
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Dave Alan Walker
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Malaya Roses 28 March 2012

What goes up... must come down... Almost me.. this is more than life reflection... Suggestive and provocative; the poet is reaching out with his own way! ! ! Excellent write.

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Ambrose Venessa 21 March 2012

I think I get the message of the poem, it speaks of an addicted fellow who is rejected by the world. It really moved me! If my explanation wasn't good enough pls tell me

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Drew Swartz 20 March 2012

loved it Dave! just loved it!

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Ra Jan 20 March 2012

Grate I like it keep going.....................

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Eric Cockrell 19 March 2012

brings back hard memories, well done!

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