Devil Comments

Could this be a poem to the Biblical dragon? If so, he does not want a little place; he wants it all. He is merely working behind the scenes. Why do you think the world is in such chaos? The real reason for my query is the sixth line, is there not a problem? I am not aware of such a word. Also, perhaps you meant these lines to read ‘want it’. Adeline

‘And view eye breaking blasts. ‘~ Uncommon sensing excellent …flavor and texture is novel and noble … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Vinod-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I don't want... how many times we all say that to ourselves... rejecting the goodness and wishing for violence. You got it, Kumar, there's the devil in us.

well this is a nice one indeed sir.. very creative, i looked at the title and expected some thing else, then i found this one..the theme expressed in a very unique and different manner sir! ! ! good one10++ with love shan

vow! what a great poem.great idea expressed in huge emotion.love this poem voted 10 surya

I think the Devil is a punk also. I think you poked the devil in the heart with a verbal sword. well done!

your poem is so beautiful and i really like it

Good expressive poem Vinu...thank s for sharing it

There is no need to feel miserable! A nice creation!

This is great, vinoduk. I feel the same way. Great write thanks for sharing.10.

your last line tells it all... tells why life is that bad aound us here...a line 'blasting out' heavily on dark minds...good write good concern yours, Vinod...10

I only want a simple thing to live life with peace and zing........... Good work................

really nice profound idea: D