Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Devastation Comments

Rating: 4.7

Bushes bow to bear
The brunt of the boots;
The satirical rope of destiny
Pull me to the edge of the garden;
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

The God feels guilty And hides in the craggy Inside of a roadside temple. Having lost His own game. Ah the cream of the poem in such a small stanza. We humans have pushed our God to a helpless state to a corner INA road side temple. Thanks poet for such a lovely poem. 10 for it.

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Soulful Heart 30 August 2011

devastation portrayed in words..........sucking praises from all. thank u for reading my poems and please do rate and comment on them.

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Amber Roser 22 August 2011

i really, really like the last stanza; that is a great piece of writing

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Tsira Gogeshvili 11 August 2011

The God feels guilty (it sounds naive) And hides in the craggy Inside of a roadside temple. Having lost His own game. ................................................ But fine lines Best wishes, Ts.

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Miss Rainbow 05 July 2011

sounds like the war to me

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