After evening papers have been thrown
Walking home I take a detour
To follow a drainage culvert
Ending in a fallow field
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The evening spills its magic in exactly the same beautiful way as you described in your poem. Everyone with an urge of experiencing pleasant things wishes to have a U turn like that and witness the artistry of Nature. The imagery shown is deified in this poem as a vista...... Regards Naseer
Very beautiful imagery, it creates a vivid experience for the reader, who is able to be there with the speaker, see the colors of the sky, the greenery on the ground, and listen to the sounds she describes. The sense impressions are very well projected-they are the essence of the reader's sense experience. Thanks so much for sharing!
What a Wonderful poem! It was as though you were following my footsteps in the Northern summer. It takes a very observant person to see all those little yet remarkable details. You have such great promise as a poet. I laud you. Adeline