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like ships passing at night, its sad when a relationship becomes a shadow of what it once was. you write about it so well and emotionally. great write.

YOU'RE SO TALENTED! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! WOW, this poem is brill (as you've probably guessed!) Thanks

Wow such wonderful expression. I can feel your emotion all through it. Thanks for sharing this poem very good.