Destiny V.S Fate Comments

Do you believe in fate? Have you no choice? Ivy

I like the thought behind this poem, but I looked destiny and fate in the dictionary, and they mean the same thing - a predetermined course of events. So, did you mean to show opposites, or was there just no choice? Scarlett

very very nice i like it. Lylyanna

I have gone through a few episodes in my life that are much like this one. Where friends were killed by drunk drivers and visa versa. It is a hard ordeal to go through and I agree with you about telling it with a good message that accompanies it.

Wrtitten with someone in mind Crystal. Great pacing and structure. Regards Denis Joe

You write with such music in the words, and in this one especially.

Very true...and very good message! !

A very wise poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

What a great message against drinking and driving!