Sunday, November 22, 2009

Destiny... (The Move Ahead) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Lowing to self I ask slow,
O my master! Where to go?

Said the self left in me,
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Bilal Khaki
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Zubyre Parvez 07 March 2011

A noble theme and interestingly written.

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Ashniki 87 10 December 2009

sir ur theme is very good. i like ur poem n thanks 4 written.plz write more poems.

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Ashwin Satyal 25 November 2009

nice peom, i really liked the theme

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 November 2009

Yes you are right. All paths lead to the same goal. A good finish.

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

A good piece to ponder on

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Romeo Della Valle 22 November 2009

Well-penned poem, I agree with Marieta, nice rational poem, thanks for sharing, keep it up, you got my vote,10+++

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Marieta Maglas 22 November 2009

and left me in a confused mark nice rational poem....

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