Sunday, October 29, 2006

Destiny That Comes In Folds Comments

Rating: 5.0

A trick of destiny entices
when the way is decided;
a pool of wine in a cup~
spills the rest, forsaken.
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Melanie Emikohe
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 30 November 2006

What a beautifully written poem... a 10! Best CJ

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Goldy Locks 30 October 2006

hi Mel! fun write. brevity of verse makes it compelling. xxtra so. rhythm? yes, we got that =]..keep on, Sus

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Melanie Emikohe

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