Monday, May 28, 2012

Destiny's Children - A Quatrain Comments

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Thetis held Achilles by his heel and dipped him in the Styx,
Gandhari's vision made Duryodhana impervious, but for his Fix;

A Mother may try all to shape His destiny and fate,
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Rishit Desai
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Avik Datta Gupta 03 August 2012

Really a short and sweet wonder...shine on! ! !

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Payal Parande 09 July 2012

.....................................................you must be thinking what the space means well its nothing i am just speechless...

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finally something new to my eyes.. well done..

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Neela Nath Das 05 June 2012

Thus the phrase came-Achilles heel means the weakest point of anyone's character.Very nicely told within a short span of limited words.

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