*** Destiny's Child Comments

wow...realy beautiful indeed....i v enough experience to know that I should not take things for granted..... and the title reminds me of famous groud 'Destiny's child'..well as a matter of fact we all are destiny's children indeed..dont know my father i mean Destiny has in store for me 10+++

a sweet poem with very much poetic flow and rich idea..well expressed, meaningful and heart touching one..you got 10 of 10 sure dear ajnu

Yeah true, nothing to be taken for granted.One thing which is sure is change be prepared for it...........well said anjali

really painful...........love never come on one at its will.......... even work out may yield for some time........ it is an natural expression from us........beautiful expressions.

beautifully written i could feel the emotion 10

In hushes and whispers I muttered, could not but reach you, but that dart did reach you to tell you of a never so called goodbye............the ceteris paribus (central idea-latin) of the poem's argument can well be illustrated through one of life's indomitable philosophy.It says that 'Some people's burgars turn into some other's cigarettes'. It could be very tangential ironically or uncanny in the sense where burgars represent ' time-pass' and cigarettes reprresent as we all know 'addiction'.This addiction is depicted through phrases and metaphors like 'balustrades' and beguile'.How can balustrades be beguiling? Human mind here is the victim of time lag.But it is based on some evidences and probabilities and posiibilities pertinent with persoanl sorrow, loss or gain as the writer reveals here.Human mind has to question in persecution which the writer does in meaningful portrayings like diction used as 'anoint' long waited 'goodbye' which draws in the attention of the avid reader.Every other possibilities precised over here is just the resultant non-sequitur(that which does not or require prove based on evidences or probabilities) .They oscillate on the positive as well as the negative phases undergone in a relationship.A 10 from me.

So very true! Love is indeed hard work! Superb expression (as always) !

Very nice....again..... it seems to me my story......... Y wnva read yo poems I found them related to me....... though it ws penned earlier b4 meeting me? Well! may be.......we......relate only those things which we always wanted to......... (Though....u don know nething about me...... but it is true........in yo this poem..) I do say dat yo poems r havin a sense of premonition(s) ......lolz..........it seems to me...... premonitions.......r also..... a things for connivance, , , , , , , ......... (A very good reminder for all----------- never take love for granted ---------- always work on it.....................................................................................) A very gud poem.......100 x 100 Regards............

a nice message..a lovely write

yeah so true lovely write Anjali......

Very true...love should be with tolerance..great poem10

very beautiful anjail... great job. thanks for sharing

Yes very true.nva tak e love to be granted...... gud 10++++++++

Yes very true.nva tak e love to be granted...... gud 10++++++++

Oh, a failed relationship, don't be disheartened, there's always love to sip, Great works..

very elegant poem with an advice. Oh yeah.. love is love, to share. work for it, go for it, long for it, seek for it, adhere to it, stick to it, bound to it...that's what we all expect along this short journey of life till our breath fade away. Lovely poem...10 is my gift.

i am really fascinated by your passionate outpourings, be it ecstasy, despair, loneiness, disillusionment. you are right Anjali, never take any relationship for granted, we have to work on it. but this is also true, if one door closes, we look so long, forget to see a window opens. great as always10 Mamta

i love it! great write...

great write...again? ...makes me stare at your words and take a deep breath...whew! ! ! really great with great and touching words.... words that painted a vivid picture of her sadness, her longing and waiting for her lost love... behind that window of destiny....(i love this image painted in my mind) love taken for granted? ...maybe its not yet over...love is sweeter the second time around....and what happened is just a test of true love...faith and destiny.......which, ONLY GOD knows... anju...you're really great....great poet in the making...........10+++++++++++++ and my vote..

great write the way you begin is sooo heavy. i love it.